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Chocolate Craving by =roseonthegrey:iconroseonthegrey:

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Give it the green light
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Vectors made in PhotoImapct5. Vector reference photos from Google. Various photo pieces from sxc.hu. Blended and compiled together in Photoshop Elements 3. Post color adjustments and text in PhotoImpact5.
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Just an idea :XD: I originally thought it should probably be a red light with the obesity concerns and all, but I then I realized I like chocolate too much :giggle:

Update: made cravings singular and changed the font color to brown =P thanks to `lazybutt for the suggestion
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=morbid-stitches May 10, 2009, 2:55:10 PM
This is a wonderful example of artistic advertising! I can see it in any page of a magazine in any language. The ad has high impact and it looks very professional.

The vector is beautiful and at first glance it looks like a photo. I love the brown font and the simplicity ads to the impact. I wondered about removing the pole the lights were on but after further thought I like the pole better because it gives the lights a sense of existence. Rooting it on the page.

I urge roseonthegrey to consider sending it to the M&M company!

(By the way if anyone knows where M&M Town is, please tell me!)
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`lazybutt May 10, 2009, 1:18:11 PM
I like the minimalism that you've been able to accomplish with this piece by having a background that is all one color, however I feel like the words are a little lost within the background. Perhaps use a darker font? I'm thinking brown perhaps, since that color is usually associated with chocolate. :)

Overall nice attempt, though!

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*Shamziel May 10, 2009, 1:20:07 PM
Heh, very cool! Great piece of work!

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=roseonthegrey May 10, 2009, 1:23:42 PM
thanks :D

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=roseonthegrey May 10, 2009, 1:25:24 PM
The background was originally white but I have a preference towards light fonts on darker backgrounds :XD:

Hum, I'll give the brown font idea a go. Thanks :D

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    And professionals built the Titanic.

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~enchantma May 10, 2009, 1:26:36 PM
haha! very cute idea! i like the concept! and now i want chocolate...

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*stardixa May 10, 2009, 1:32:50 PM
Very creative idea! :aww:

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~The-Rob May 10, 2009, 1:33:18 PM
this is pretty cool.
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~tiramixu May 10, 2009, 1:33:31 PM
that's so creative! i love your work!
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